My Writing is Untidy – Does it Matter?

Writer-for-a-Reason Serena wrote in with a lovely encouragement last week, and a question at the end, which you might be able to identify with:

Since I’ve taken your advice to read, read and read, my writing has started to improve.

I’ve been following your writing tips nearly every morning and it’s now part of my daily routine.

I will also be hoping to start the course next week.

One thing I find difficult is how to understand what I’ve written as my writing can be a bit untidy with lots of mistakes and scribbling out. Is there any advice on this?”

YES!

I would suggest the following process for anyone who’s getting cross with themselves:

Make a list of as many ideas as you can think of, that you could do to help yourself. This list will be different for everyone! Serena’s list might include writing slower, using paper with wider lines, using a better pen, using a neat line to cross things out, typing instead of handwriting…

When you have a good list (don’t stop at one or two ideas – the best ones will come later down the list), choose one to start with, get to grips with it, then gradually include any other improvements you’d like to see.

This will help you be your best self!

But this is my best advice of all: BE YOURSELF.

Everyone is different, when it comes to writing stories, and there’s no right or wrong about how to go about your first draft. Some people will write loads of notes. Others won’t. Some will be tidy. Some won’t. Some will write on paper first. Others will go straight to the keyboard.

The important thing is to have a great story at the end! How you get there is up to you.

I write a first draft very quickly after writing chapter synopses, then spend months and months editing the draft. I also add pictures in the text and remove them later, if I want to see something in my mind, to be able to describe it properly.

Other writers will come at the whole thing very differently. It doesn’t matter.

What does matter is that you END UP with a gripping, thrilling, relevant story for your readers.

For some reason, we all think we must be going about the whole thing wrong, and that ‘other writers’ have it all sussed out. We don’t! Nobody does! Every one of us is unique, so embrace your gift, write like you, and don’t let anything stop you using your gift, your way. Don’t forget, only you can write your story, and someone’s waiting for it.

Trust that helps,

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Janet

P.S. I keep meaning to write a bit more about the Write for a Reason Academy, and still haven’t got round to it. In the meantime, if you’d like to know more, click here. (We start again in January.) The course will help you make sure you are getting all the basics right. I have received too many unsolicited manuscripts that have potential, but things that aren’t quite right. It might be issues with characters, plot, narrative voice, the beginning, the ending… you will be looking at all these on the course, at your own pace. (This is why I set up the course – to help beginners write great stories their readers will love.) If you love writing novels for children/teens, or have that gnawing feeling that you have a gift, but need to get it to work, this course is for you. Over the ten weeks of the Academy you will gain all the confidence and the skills you need to write a brilliant story your readers will love! Hope to see you there.

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Refresh and Renew

Good morning from a still-dark London! Well, it might not be dark by the time you read this. 🙂

Apologies for being a day late with this writing tip – I took a day off yesterday to see a friend (sitting outside a café with a coffee in December – who would have thought it!)… plus I took a walk in a local park. As you see, it was misty! It was cold, but beautiful.

It was good to take time off. I was going to write to you today about narrative voice, but actually I’m going to write to you about refreshment, because I think it’s important.

Sometimes we get stale. This year we have lacked variety in our lives, haven’t we? Most of us have been at home pretty much constantly, with the same people, doing all the same things…

Let me encourage you to take time to do something different this week to nourish your body, soul and spirit. This will mean different things for different people. Here are some ideas:

  • Create something beautiful
  • Have a group chat with friends
  • Walk somewhere different
  • Read a brilliantly-written book
  • Try out some new recipes
  • Take up a challenge

Stop right now, decide what you are going to do, and commit to doing it. Not something you HAVE to do or OUGHT to do, but something which will bring YOU pleasure. 🙂

And you know what – your writing will be better for it.

Let me know what you plan to do!

Something else you can do, is enrol for the Write for a Reason course. Registration is now open for the January start. You can read more about it here. If you write fiction for older children and/or teens and want to make sure you’re getting all the basics right, I’d love to help you take the next step in your writing journey. A little bit of knowledge can make all the difference. Don’t waste any more time getting the basics wrong! Narrative voice, character arc, plot development… we go through all these and so much more. And it’s great fun! Hope to see you there.

Stay safe,

Janet

P.S. Is there someone else you know who might like to join the course, or receive these free writing tips? Do feel free to pass on the information.

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Getting Dialogue Right

Hello and welcome to this week’s creative writing tip, which is a vital issue for Christians who write fiction for children and young people.

Recently, a writer-for-a-reason asked me:

– How do I capture the realistic tone and cadence of a modern UK teenager’s speech a little better than I have so far!?

What an excellent question!

This is VITAL to get right – writers ignore this issue at their peril. If a potential reader picks up the book and the language looks dated, they will automatically think:

“This isn’t for me. ” Noooooo!

There’s one BIG solution. Spend time in the presence of your potential readers.

This really is the very best way you can absorb the way your readers (and therefore your characters) speak. Watch out for:

1. The way they talk to different people (peers, parents, siblings etc.).

2. Their body language while they are saying what they say – this will tell you a lot!

3. What they talk about.

4. The vocabulary they use.

Also, while you’re in the zone, take a note of their clothing/hairstyles/jewellery/make-up, for descriptive purposes.

If you absolutely can’t do this right now (sigh), here’s an alternative:

Watch TV shows loved by the age group you are writing for – reality TV shoes and dramas with real-life scenarios are the best. (If you don’t know what to watch, ask your potential readers what they like.) Be prepared to be shocked! But hey, there’s no point writing from an ivory tower… and you will glean so much useful information.

Whatever you do, keep writing, because only you can write your story, and someone, somewhere, is waiting for it.

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Janet

P.S. Registration for the Write for a Reason Academy opens tomorrow, for the January intake. If you want to take your writing to the next level, and don’t want to waste any more time making easily-remedied mistakes (possibly that you don’t even know you are making), you will want to join. Click here for more info.

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Recommended Reading List

Hello and welcome to this week’s blog post! I hope you are keeping well in these difficult times, and that you are getting on well with your fun writing prompts – let me know how it’s going. One writer for a reason, Katy, said, “I ended up writing a seriously creepy version of Asda – something I don’t think I would have ever done off my own back. Thanks Janet – really loving having my creativity stretched alongside the useful tips.” In case you missed the email/blog post, you can find the writing prompts here. Enjoy!

Instead of a new writing tip this week (I’m guessing you still have some writing prompts left to do?), I’d really like your help.

I’d like to set up a Recommended Reading List for writers for a reason. What I want is recommendations, and the reason why you suggest writers of fiction for kids/teens should consider reading them.

fantastic library

For example, in our facebook community group, writer-for-a-reason Elaine suggested: “I recently read The Land of Neverendings by Kate Saunders and thought it was amazing and brilliant. It is probably mid-grade though adults would enjoy it too. She deals with the theme of grief but in such a unique way with toys coming to life (the stuff of childhood fantasy – well mine anyway). I can’t say enough about this book – the message is definitely Christian in direction and hope.”

If we can build a good Recommended Reading List, we will all benefit!

Also, if you have been through the Write for a Reason Academy, and have some books your ‘one reader’ loves, please include those. Thank you! I think this will be a useful resource to have available to share with everyone. 🙂

The books can be for the age group we are writing for, or for adults if there’s a particular reason you think it would be a useful read. Christian or secular. But let’s stick to novels! And please don’t include your own books or your friends’ books, so we can be completely objective.

Thank you for your help! See you next week,

Janet

P.S. Add your recommended books in the comments below, hop on over to our Write for a Reason Community Group (If you don’t yet belong, send a request), or get in touch with me via email. Thanks for your help!

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30 Fun Creative Writing Prompts

Writing should be enjoyable, right? As there’s not so much fun around right now, here are 30 creative writing prompts for you to enjoy! They will also spark your imagination and release your creativity – what’s not to like? 🙂 Why not do one a day for the next 30 days? If you write stories from a Christian perspective for children/teens, you will love this!

These are the rules:

  • Pen and paper only. (Sorry, technophiles. This is so you can’t edit.) If you have a beautiful notebook waiting to be used, now’s the perfect time to fill those pages.
  • No editing. Just allow your creative side to run free.
  • If a topic doesn’t grab you, move on to the next one.
  • Write for as long or as short a time as you wish. Two minutes, or two hours – keep writing as long as you are enjoying it.
  • You have to have a nice coffee/glass of wine/favourite drink and a cookie/chocolate bar/bowl of cherries/cream doughnut/tub of ice-cream (insert your own delicious treat here!) by your side as you write. (If anyone asks why, tell them you’re just following the rules.)
Cookies

Here are your topics:

  1. You are in a spaceship headed for… because…
  2. You have an exciting/terrible secret…
  3. You find a message in a bottle washed up on the beach…
  4. Digging in your garden, you find a bone…
  5. Write about a book you have read recently, or a film you have watched. What can you learn from it, for your own writing?
  6. Write a prayer for the children of the world.
  7. Your least favourite person in the world is coming for dinner…
  8. During a walk in the park, a dog runs up and speaks to you… (you weren’t expecting THAT – or maybe you were…)
  9. You have won a prize! Yay! What for, and what have you won?
  10. You are on a boat. After drifting off to sleep, you wake up and find yourself alone…
  11. Everyone in your family has a super power…
  12. An article all about you appears in the national press! What’s it all about?
  13. Massive flying beasts have taken over your local supermarket…
  14. Suddenly you are ten years old again (or the age of your intended readers)…
  15. Give the titles of ten novels you’d like to write before you die (take hold of the life that is truly life).
  16. If you could change one thing in your world, what would it be?
  17. Oh no, the panic buyers are at it again…
  18. There’s been a natural disaster, and you’re off to help…
  19. You’ve been invited to be an extra in your favourite TV show, but something goes wrong…
  20. You’ve just found out the ghastly vase you inherited is worth a fortune, and nobody knows but you…
  21. Everything has gone wrong today…
  22. Everything has gone right today…
  23. You are in solitary confinement, writing to your family…
  24. What are you bad at?
  25. What are you good at? (Come on, there are loads of things!)
  26. Oh my word – you can fly!
  27. Community. What does that mean to you these days?
  28. What do you fear?
  29. What do you love? Write a list, and expand if you wish.
  30. Every night you turn into a white cat…

Enjoy! These should take you pretty much through the new month of lockdown, in you are in the UK. If not, they should take you through the next 30 days or so. 🙂

If you would like to download these as a downloadable, printable pdf, please click here:

We are going through a difficult time, but there’s no reason not to have a bit of light-hearted fun. Do come over to the Write for a Reason Community Facebook group and share your writing, and share this page with your friends in writing groups so they can have some fun, too. Let’s encourage each other!

Stay safe,

white kitten

Janet

P.S. People have been asking about the next Write for a Reason Academy. God willing, I will open registration in December for a January start. I hope that will suit you. Do let your friends know. 🙂

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Don’t Let Them Stop You

Good morning. Welcome from a rather dull London, where things are as unsettled from Covid-19 as they ever were. Where will the next spike in virus cases be? Will we have to go up to Tier Three? What will the regulations be by Christmas? Will we be able to spend time with family?

When we are unsettled, it’s difficult to be productive. Our restless thoughts flit to and fro, wandering, wondering. Focussed thought is difficult – we are constantly going back to the same unanswerable questions. Plus, of course, there are our concerns for loved ones affected by the virus.

That’s not much good when we have a book to write! Many writers I know are struggling to be creative right now, even if they have the time to set aside. Does that include you? It certainly includes me!

But this morning I have a productivity tip for you (and me!).

Just do it.

Set the time aside and sit down, and even if progress is slow, even if you struggle, even if it seems like a waste of time… j u s t k e e p g o i n g.

Put times in your calendar for writing, and make sure you are sitting at your desk when you have said you would.

Two things will happen:

  1. You will feel better because you are doing what you said you would do
  2. Your book will get written.

True, it will take longer. True, your thoughts may wander more than they used to. True, it may feel exhausting.

How do I know? Because I’m doing it myself. I can tell you for sure, though, that it’s worth the effort, because little by little, my story is taking shape. So can yours!

So many children are struggling right now. They need to hear the good news you and I are planning to share.

So keep writing, my friends, keep writing for the glory of God. Don’t worry if it takes longer than normal – longer is better than not at all.

Have a great writing week, and let me know how you get on. If you want to send me your writing times, for some accountability, feel free. I always love to hear from you. 🙂

Janet Wilson from Write for a Reason and Dernier Publishing

Janet

P.S. If your church is thinking of buying Christian books for church kids or children from your community this Christmas, Dernier Publishing has a 20% discount coupon code for churches and charities. Let me know if you’d like it. (Click here to sign up for Dernier news)

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Having Fun Together

Morning everyone. Hope you are keeping safe. I get the feeling that in these strange times, some writers are finding it more difficult to write creatively. With newer, tougher Covid-19 restrictions facing some of us, I suspect this could get worse.

So this week I have a fun exercise we can all participate in – because writing should be fun! Plus I hope that it will also help to build our writing community, so we don’t feel quite so alone with our desk and our keyboard…

A couple of weeks ago I put up this picture on the blog. One writer-for-a-reason asked me why. Well, I thought she looked like she is waiting to tell us her story – don’t you think?

young lady

So here’s the idea: this week, let’s make up her story together!

I’ll start. She’s wearing her rich friend’s designer glasses for this photo, because she thinks her plain ones make her look ugly.

Now it’s your turn! Come over to the Write for a Reason Community Facebook group, and add your own comment – a bit of back-story, family background, issues she faces, a trial she has to overcome, how she is going to do it, and who with. Let’s give this young lady a story worth writing about. 🙂

See you there,

Janet

P.S. If you don’t belong to the group, ask to join, and I’ll let you in. Tell your friends, too – let’s have some fun!

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Today I Was the Delivery Driver!

Good morning and welcome to this week’s writing tip. Actually, it’s not so much of a tip, as an encouragement.

See my boot full of boxes of books? This morning, early, I delivered 400 copies of Nobody’s Dog to central London. From here they will be sent to prisoners’ children this Christmas, through Prison Fellowship’s Angel Tree programme. How wonderful is that? The author, Eleanor Watkins, is delighted, of course! Nobody’s Dog is a fun story about a boy and a dog… and faith, hope and trust. It’s a book full of seeds, some of which will land in good ground and bear fruit.

But what does this have to do with you? Well, perhaps it’s time for you to dream a little. How far could your books go, if you kept writing? Could your story also touch young hearts?

The answer is YES, OF COURSE! You have been given your gift of writing for a reason.

Overnight success, however, is rare. If you want to be successful, you have to put in the work FIRST.

Keep working on your skills. Keep praying. Keep writing. Faithfully put your talent to work. Then who knows what the Lord will do?

Perhaps one day your novels will bring joy, hope, light and life in dark places. 🙂

Never give up, my friends! Nobody can write your novel but you, and someone’s waiting for it.

Kind regards,

Janet

P.S. If you have been sent this by a friend and would like to sign up for weekly writing tips and encouragement, you can do so here.

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Have Your Interviewed Your Protagonist?

Hello and welcome to this new writing tip!

Here’s an idea to help you with your writing:

Interview your main character. Ask about their life – what they like and dislike, their home, their family, their friends, their upbringing. What are their strengths and weaknesses – their gifts, and the things they struggle with. What happened in their past to bring them to this place? What will they hope happens in the future? If they could wish for anything, what would it be? What might happen if they don’t act?

You can probably think of lots more questions to ask! This exercise will help you get to know your protagonist well, and therefore make him or her all the more real to readers. The better your readers know your character (as long as they like him or her!) the more they will need to keep reading to make sure everything goes well for them and that they win through at the end of the story…

Let me know if you do this! I’d love to hear from you. 🙂

While I’m here, this is the last call if you’d like to join the last Write for a Reason Academy of 2020. We spend a whole week looking at your protagonist, so you can have the perfect character to engage and delight your readers. I hope to do the course again next year, but I can’t guarantee it, so if you’ve been thinking about it, perhaps now is the time to just do it? I’d love to help you with your writing – you will learn more than you can imagine, and who knows what next year will bring? Maybe now is your time. Here’s the link, anyway – do take a look. And if it’s not for you right now, could you pass it on to a friend?

Blessings to you and yours,

Janet

P.S. I hopped on to facebook to do a quick ‘live’ on the topic of interviewing your protagonist – please find it below. 🙂

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