The latest Write for a Reason course has just come to an end… as always it’s been lots of fun, and I’ve enjoyed getting to know the students. One issue that has cropped up once again, as it often seems to, is the use of dialogue tags. I’ve mentioned this here before, but thought I’d bring it up again.

Dialogue tags are words like said, asked and replied, that are added to speech so we know who is doing the talking.

For example:

I’m coming too,” said Mum.*

Now we know it’s Mum speaking this line. You can use other words – whispered, yelled, muttered, and a hundred and one other words, but simple tags such as said, replied and asked tend to become invisible, which is helpful if the conversation is supposed to be flowing quickly. There is a place for using more descriptive tags; just make sure they are carefully chosen, and you don’t overdo them.

Here’s an example:

I’ve brought you some wild flowers,” I said.

Thank you,” she whispered.*

Warning: use even more sparingly tags that are action-related rather than speech-related (such as wept, hissed and gulped). You don’t have to leave them out; just be aware that they can get in the way of your dialogue rather than enhance it. Consider if there might be a way of showing the character doing the action, instead of saying it. It’s not wrong to use these action tags, but as is often the case, everything in moderation.

Here’s an example, which helps to build up a picture of the person speaking:

They’re sly,” she hissed. “They’re scum.”*

You can skip dialogue tags altogether if it’s obvious who is speaking.

For example:

What the hell do you think you’re doing?”

It’s only a sponge ball.”

I’ll sponge ball you in a minute.”*

You do need tags if there could be any doubt about who is talking, especially if the dialogue is between more than two people. There’s nothing more annoying for readers than having to go back and check who said what!

You can also use an action instead of a tag. For example:

He sipped at his tea. “Is that what you really want?”*

We don’t need to add, “he said”; we know the man drinking the tea is speaking, so no tag is required.

Does that help? And if you’re not sure if you are getting your punctuation in the right place, go back over the previous lines and check you have all your ” and , . ! ? in the right place. 🙂

And don’t forget to start each new speech on a new line!

Please let me know in the comments if you found this post helpful, or if you’d be interested in joining the next course. Any feedback is great, to help me to help you!

Janet Wilson

Until next time,

Janet

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*All quotations are from The Only Way by Gareth Rowe, published by Dernier Publishing.

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Dialogue Tags

2 thoughts on “Dialogue Tags

  • 8th April 2019 at 7:41 pm
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    Great advice!

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    • 9th April 2019 at 8:41 am
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      Glad you found it useful, Debra! 🙂

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