The Spoken Word

Just a quick tip today:

Make sure your novel sounds great when read aloud.

Maybe one day your book will be made into an audio book! This will not only be great for readers with sight loss, but children who struggle to read, or who just love to listen to stories.

As you edit your work in progress, read each paragraph out loud. You might find you want to change your sentence structure, your punctuation, your word choices and your paragraph lengths.

Take time over this step. It will not only help when you come to record your novel, but it will almost certainly help with the flow of the written story, too. 🙂

Trust that helps!

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Until next week,

Blessings abundant,

Janet

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You’ve Got to Have a Problem

What fabulous sunshine we’ve had in the south of England this last week! That’s all very nice for us, but sunny weather and everything going swimmingly doesn’t make for a good story.

Every good story needs a problem – some kind of conflict. And goodness, there are so many desperate situations you could make a story out of. I’m sure you don’t need reminding.

Suppose it’s a lovely sunny day, and William and Izzy go with their family to the beach. If they have fun making sandcastles, enjoy swimming in the sea, searching rock pools for crabs, have a delicious ice-cream, then go home happy, readers might feel cheated.

Why?

There was no problem for the characters to solve.

Now let’s suppose William and Izzy go with their family to the beach. While they are making sandcastles, their dog gets lost. Now you have a story! You can bring in a baddy, a rock fall and a scary cave before the children find their dog, if you like. How exciting/scary you make it depends on the age of your readers, of course, but even small children can understand looking for a lost dog, and be delighted when he’s found, safe and sound.

It doesn’t matter if the problem is an earthquake, a monster, dragons, pirates, stolen clothes, poisonous jellyfish or a shipwreck… but you have to give your characters a problem, and/or a dangerous quest.

Is your story too ‘nice’? You may have to get mean!

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Hope that helps!

See you next week,

Janet

P.S. We look at conflicts and your story plan in detail in the Write for a Reason Academy. If this has whetted your appetite, come on over and join us!

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One Way to Quickly Add Atmosphere and Emotion to Your Story

As you probably know, I write as well as publish. I just love to write!

Right now I am writing about a lad called Lance, who needs to respond to a message in a bottle which has been lowered on a piece of string outside his bedroom window (what fun writing is!), and thought you might be interested to see how a few strong words can completely transform a sentence.

Draft: Lance went to his desk, took a page out of a notebook and picked up a pen from his bedside table.

Edited version: Lance ran to his desk, ripped a page out of a notebook and snatched a pen from his bedside table.

Better, huh?

I shared this on our Write for a Reason Community Facebook page, and have some more fabulous ideas to inspire you!

Joanne wrote: I’d love to hear the opposite too and imagine the scenario behind itLance meandered over to his desk, thumbed through a notebook for an empty page and wondered where he might find a pen…

Carol wrote:

Just for fun: Lance crawled over to his desk, pulled down his notebook, scrabbled for an empty page and located a broken pencil the only thing left in his room…

Gotta love all the creativity!

Now it’s time for you to get to work to add atmosphere and emotion in your own work:

  1. Let those examples sink in for a minute or two, and feel how different they are to the first (boring!) draft.
  2. Go through your current work in progress, and see if there are any changes you could make, to add more atmosphere and emotion – with a few strong words.
  3. Come over to the Facebook page and add your ideas!

Let’s keep inspiring each other. Our readers are worth it!

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

May the grace of God be with you,

Janet

P.S. If you’re not a member of our Community Group, just ask and I’ll let you in. And do invite your writer friends!

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Kill Your Darlings

You may have heard the saying ‘kill your darlings’. It sounds pretty awful, and not something that Christian writers would do!

But… sometimes we may have to.

What does it mean?

Even if we have written a careful story plan, we may sometimes find that a plot point, or a character, a scene, or a paragraph of dialogue, does not need to be there. It hurts… but it may need to be CUT (killed, even though we’ve grown fond of it, having spent hours writing it ). Ouch!

Why should you do it?

Every word in your story should be there for a reason. If it’s not:

  • moving the story forward
  • helping readers get to know the characters
  • serving a useful function

it should GO.

When you should do it?

Sometimes, as writers, we can get carried away with an idea for a scene, or think adding a particular character would be fun. But why? The big question is, are we adding this because we’re enjoying writing it, or because our readers will love it and need it to make sense of the story? If it adds nothing to the novel, it needs to DIE. Sorry!

Think of it as clearing your garden. All the weeds and brambles need to be dug up. Some of them may have attractive flowers, but they shouldn’t be there. We need to get rid of everything that is in the way of seeing the beautifully kept garden.

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Do you have any darlings you need to kill? Sometimes the job just has to be done, however painful!

Let me know how you get on!

Janet

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Choosing Names for Your Characters

My son and his wife are expecting their first child in the summer, and we have been discussing names – what fun!

When you are writing your stories, you also have the privilege of choosing names for all your characters. This can be a bit of a headache, and you don’t necessarily have nine months to mull over your choices! I’ve previously written about how to choose names, so I won’t repeat myself, but here’s an idea to help you choose:

Online, you can search for the top most popular names from the previous year. This is a brilliant way to choose a name for your protagonist that will be liked by the most people right now!

Children watching a boat.

In 2020, the most popular names for girls were Olivia, Amelia and Isla. For boys, the most popular names were Oliver, George and Noah.

Many countries have their own official data, which is hugely helpful, and some also allow you to search by region/state.

Here’s another thing: If your characters (and therefore your readers) are ten years old, you can search for what the favourite names were ten years ago in the country where your story is set. If her little brother is five years old, or an older sibling 20 years old, you can find popular names for those years, too!

You can even go back decades to peruse a list of popular names – how useful is that, for parents, grandparents or the names of neighbours and family friends? You may not be surprised to know that the top three names for girls in 1960 in the UK were Susan, Julie and Karen. The top boys names for the same year were David, Paul and Andrew. 🙂

You can check back to any year you wish, or you can even go further and search for the rarest names, or names that are inspired by flowers, or popular Italian names… there are so many lists out there, all ready to help you!

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Trust that helps you in your search for names,

Janet

P.S. Let me know if you give this a go, and which websites you found most helpful!

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Essential Stuff!

Another week has flown by, and here we are again, with another creative writing tip. 🙂

Thanks to everyone who responded with their thoughts on last week’s ideas on listening to music while you write. It seems that everyone finds something different helpful! Which just goes to show how unique we all are… and how essential it is that you write your stories, because no one can write them, but you.

Right, on to this week’s writing tip. This is something I talk about a lot, because I see it too often in manuscripts I am sent – characters who are either too nice, or too nasty. If you’re writing a pantomime, or a cartoon, or a fairytale, you can get away with caricatures, but if you’re writing a story that is relevant for today’s readers, you need to make your characters at least seem real. This really is vital.

All characters need to be ’rounded’, especially your protagonist. Of course, they need to be inspirational, but they also need to have flaws and issues. They need to get despondent when things go badly – or even get to the point of despair. They shouldn’t always be cheerful, always kind to everyone, or always helpful, especially to people who are treating them badly. Equally, they shouldn’t be always nasty or vicious!

Readers need to read about characters who, like them, want to do their best but sometimes struggle. Or even, sometimes, seek revenge! Who, when life throws them a curved ball, get upset. Who, when tragedy strikes, are filled with grief – and sometimes take it out on the people they love the most. These characters will be engaging, because readers will recognise something of themselves in them.

If your characters are courageous despite the difficulties, they will inspire. But make sure the struggle is real, and triumph not too easy –a hero is not a hero unless he or she has passed through a fight to win through.

Hope that helps! We spend a whole module looking at your protagonist in the Write for a Reason Academy, which you can now join any time to suit you. Katy, a writer-for-a-reason, started the course in January, and finished the course last week! Due to having children at home, she took longer than the ten weeks, but kept going. She told me:

I finished the course last week!!! Such a wonderful moment. Really excited about the plan I’ve created and so much more confident and encouraged than when I started. Thank you Janet for pursuing this part of your calling to encourage others to write for Jesus, for modelling stepping out in courage and faith, and for all your effort in putting together this incredibly helpful course. It’s brilliant. x”

If you want to be where Katy is in a few weeks, with a full story plan, great characters and the confidence to get your story done, you can join the course here. Any queries, please don’t hesitate to get in touch. I set up the course to help anyone who writes Christian fiction for children and teens… because if you feel called to write, you need to get your story done – and we all need help to hone our gifts!

Have a wonderful Easter, celebrating the death and resurrection of our Lord Jesus Christ. We have so much good news to share!

Grace and peace be yours in abundance,

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Janet

P.S. You can read more about the Write for a Reason Academy here. Please share with friends who write. Thank you!

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The Best Music for Writing

Another week has gone by… where does the time go?

Well, I know exactly where yesterday went; I spent almost the whole day looking up a piece of music, so we could buy the rights to use it in a video trailer we’re doing for a book.

That brought me on to thinking about the best music for writing.

Do you listen to music while you write? I’ve found that when I do, my productivity goes up!

Here’s what works best for me:

  1. Upbeat music (nothing too slow or depressing!)…
  2. That moves me emotionally…
  3. That goes with whatever I am writing.

At the moment I’m listening to epic movie themes, because I’ve reached the part in my latest story where everything is going wrong for the characters (four friends from a church youth club). There’s a sense of battle and the need to overcome… and the movie music is perfect.

Why not give music a go, while you are writing? It stirs the soul and helps you dig deep. Or perhaps you already have a playlist? If you do, let me know what you listen to, so I can share it with your fellow writers. 🙂

Happy listening,

Janet

P.S. Caveat: don’t spend so long choosing your music that you run out of time to write! 🙂

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Bringing Hope


I watched a film at the weekend. Nothing particularly unusual about that! But this film left me feeling… I’m struggling for the right word… troubled. There was no hope! Everyone in the film was trying to get one up on the others. I know that’s what human nature is like… but in Christ Jesus there is hope for fallen, sinful man. We can be redeemed! We are loved, and therefore we can love in return.


Yesterday I attended a funeral (via webcast). In contrast to the film, I came away with hope! Jesus is the resurrection and the life, and there is hope in Him – wonderful, eternal, joyful hope!


This world so badly needs to hear this message of hope, so let’s keep writing, my friends. Stories are a brilliant way to share good news – they can touch not just the children we write for, but whole families in a gentle and respectful way.

Lighthouse and sunset


So don’t give up! I know it’s difficult right now to be creative. I know some of you are going through tough times, but here’s an idea: do one small thing every day towards getting your story done. Read a book your target audience enjoy, to be inspired. Write out a list of characters. Buy my e-book of writing tips, and read one every day. Draw a map of your setting. Write a synopsis of each chapter… there are so many small things you could do, daily, to keep your story alive!


There’s nothing wrong with small steps – every journey starts with a step. But every step will bring you closer to your destination.

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing


Thanks for reading. Be blessed,


Janet

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Good News to Share!

Reaching the new generation with the love of Jesus can be tricky in this political climate, but stories are a brilliant way to spread the word in a non-threatening and respectful way.

Who knows how long we will have to be able to spread the good news of Jesus in stories for our children in the UK? As part of our sales strategy at Dernier, we contact schools – many, as soon as they hear the words ‘Christian books’ can’t get off the phone fast enough. (So we’re reaching out to Christian teachers, instead. If you know one, please do give them this link, for free books and the opportunity to buy more books at discount.)

Let’s shine our light!

In some countries, giving a Christian book to a child could get you into a lot of trouble. Maybe you live in one of these places now. When I wanted to visit a country in SE Asia a couple of years ago, I had to write and sign a note declaring that I wouldn’t take part in any media or publishing activities while in the country, in order to obtain my visa.

Right now, in the west, we are still relatively free (although some hot topics might already be sliding out of limits!).

So don’t delay with your story. Whether you write for teens, pre-teens or younger children, remember that your story has the potential to share something of the gospel with readers who might not otherwise hear it. And once the books are out there, they can be on bookshelves for years, so have the potential to reach whole families and even generations of families, or library readers! Faith, hope, love, answered prayer, light, life… these are wonderful themes that money can’t buy.

Don’t waste your opportunity. Don’t waste your time. Don’t waste your gift.

We need to flood the world with great books while we can!

It takes boldness, determination, effort and time to get to the end and get your book out into the world, but it’s worth it, and if you’ve been called to write, YOU CAN DO IT.

So write the very best book you can. Don’t be the one who never finished your story. Someone’s waiting for it!

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Keep writing!

Janet

P.S. I recorded lots of videos with useful/essential writing-related tips throughout February… you can watch them all on the Write for a Reason blog. Please do use them – I made them for you!

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