Are your writing goals big enough, or small enough?

Happy New Year! Sorry to be slightly late in this greeting. Unfortunately, along with a huge number of other people, I’ve had some kind of virus – I didn’t feel so well last week. But here I am again, still a bit hoarse, but ready to go!

Hope you are keeping well.

Do you have any writing aims for this year? Want to start a novel, finish a novel, edit a manuscript?

Here’s a suggestion: take time aside with your writing journal to consider your aims. Dream big! What would you like to have accomplished in the next five or ten years, as well as this year? Be bold – children need your stories! Write it all down, and pray as you write.

Then, when you have your big aims set, come back down to today and tomorrow, and the rest of the week. What is realistically achievable?

Don’t make your daily/weekly goal so big that you will fail!

But don’t make it too small that it doesn’t stretch you a tiny bit.

When you’ve decided on a goal that you know you can achieve, get some accountability. Let someone know! Someone kind, but who will check up on you and make sure you are fulfilling your dream, one small step at a time.

Because that’s what success is, isn’t it? It’s being faithful, day by day, and the new year is a great time to stop and take stock.

The new year is also a good time to consider if you need some extra help. If you feel you could do with learning/reminding yourself of all the basics you need to write engaging stories, why not join the Write for a Reason Academy? You’ll love it! This online course will give you everything you need to write excellent, relevant, fun novels. And it’s great fun! You can learn at your own pace in your own time, one module at a time. Don’t risk making mistakes with characters, plot, theme, narrative voice and other novice errors (including weaving in your Christian message). I wrote the course because I see the same mistakes in manuscripts by new authors over and over again, that are learnable skills don’t let that be you. You will learn things you didn’t even know you didn’t know!!! That’s a promise – in fact, it’s a guarantee. If you’re not finding it helpful by the end of the first couple of modules, I will give you your money back.

Sorry to go on a bit, but I do feel really passionate about the course – it’s so frustrating when stories have so much potential, but the author has missed simple things like story arcs aren’t closed, or there are errors with narrative voice that a novice may not notice, but will leave questions in readers’ minds. And there’s a monthly pay feature, to make it a bit easier on the finances. And you’ll only need to do it once and you’ll have all the material at your fingertips… I’d better stop there! Here’s the link to take a closer look. In fact, let me give you a coupon code for 50% off, to help you in these tough times: hang on while I set it up…. there! The code is newyear2023 and is valid for the first 10 people who join, so if you’re interested, don’t delay. I do hope it helps. Any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask.

If the course isn’t for you, but you’d like a writing buddy group to help you get your novel done, for regular honest but friendly feedback, fellowship and accountability, join Writers for a Reason Unite. It’s brilliant! This isn’t a course, but regular meetings on Zoom with other writers just like you, who write fiction for children. We had meetings yesterday, and it was great. You can also ask me questions. A couple we had yesterday were about copyright and if a character is going to die, should they have a ‘speaking part’? You can check the group out here. I’d love you to join us. 🙂

And, of course, I’m really delighted to be able to keep sending out these emails regularly. Do tell your friends and spread the word – this is all free, and it’s for you, because I’m passionate about helping authors fill their potential and get more brilliant books into more young hands.

Until next time, may the Lord bless you and keep you, and inspire you with your writing!

Grace and peace,

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Janet

P.S. In case you’ve scrolled quickly to the bottom, this is the link to the Write for a Reason Academy. This is the link for Writers for a Reason Unite. Hope to see you there!

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A Quick Way to Add Atmosphere to Your Story

Good morning my writer friends,

I’m writing to you today from a snowy London!

The snow reminded me of something that will definitely help your novel with atmosphere – make sure you talk about the weather!

You don’t have to be obsessive about it, like us Brits, hehe. But bringing in the warmth of the sun on your protagonist’s face, the wind whipping their hair, the silence of the snow, the crunch of walking in fallen leaves in the park in the autumn… all these add atmosphere and therefore add to your readers’ engagement and enjoyment of the story.

So bring in that weather!

Take a look at your manuscript and see where you can add in a little bit of weather… enjoy!

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Secrets!

Good morning my writer friends!

I don’t know what it is about the dark evenings and long nights that makes me think of secrets…

I’ve taken this week’s writing tip from our November Writing Challenge. (If you want to do the last couple of weeks, feel free – sign up here.)

I hope you find it useful!

Children love secrets. A secret island, a secret friend, a secret garden, a secret passage… all these make wonderful additions to children’s/teens’ stories.

Another type of secret could be a super power – perhaps one of your characters can fly, see in the dark, or anticipate disasters… but nobody else knows. Maybe someone knows where the treasure is hidden, why mum cries at night, or where grandpa hides his magic lantern. The secret can be good or bad… The possibilities are endless, and they will all add something extra to your story! Could you add a secret to your story?

It’s time to set your imagination free! If you’re working on a manuscript: Consider how you could add a secret to your story, and write it in. It could be a big secret or a little secret – it’s up to you. If you’re writing for fun: Write a mini story about a character with a secret. Maybe it’s even biographical! Enjoy, my friends, and I’ll see you here again soon. 🙂

Every blessing,

Janet

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A Fun Writing Exercise For You!

Today, instead of a writing tip, I have a ten-minute writing exercise for you. 🙂

The idea is to describe what your protagonist is wearing at the beginning of your story. (Or if you haven’t got a story right now, make up a character.)

Include lots of detail. Why are they wearing this outfit? What’s special about each item? Did they choose the clothes themselves, or are they hand-me-downs or gifts? Is the clothing old and worn out, or brand new? What about colour?

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Is their any significance to what they are wearing? What is the image they want to portray? What about jewellery and make up? Does any piece have special significance?

How does their outfit make them feel? Grown-up, embarrassed, important, significant, cared for or neglected?

This fun little exercise need only take ten minutes – so instead of scrolling through Instagram once today, grab a pen and paper or your phone, and do this instead!

By the end of the assignment, you will have got to know your protagonist a little better – so you can make him/her more real for your readers as you write. And that’s a great thing, because the more engaging your characters, the more engaging your novel will be. 🙂

There are lots more exercises like this in the November Challenge (I’ve had lots of fun planning them for you!). If you’d like to join us, this is the link to sign up.

Have a great weekend,

Janet

P.S. Thanks to those of you who have already signed up. You’re in for a treat! The Challenge starts on Tuesday, so if you are thinking about joining, don’t leave it too long. And if you’ve missed all the info about it, simply click on the link for more info. Hope to see you there!

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Why Choose the First Person Narrative Voice?

There are many and varied reasons for choosing to use the first person voice (I, we, she/he) instead of the third person (he, she, it/ they/them).

Here I’ve looked at five reasons you might wish to use the first person. I trust it will help you get some clarity on your decision!

If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to get in touch. 🙂

Blessings abundant,

Janet

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Secondary Characters – Have You Got Them Covered?

Here’s a writing tip that came up a couple of weeks ago when I was running a writing workshop in Hungary, with an international group of writers. (It was such fun!).

Somebody asked, how many secondary characters should we have in our stories for children?

I asked the others: What do you think? One of the ladies immediately told us that she had read a series of novels as a child, but there were so many characters, she didn’t really get to know any of them very well. Hmm. Worth thinking about that!

We decided that the best number of secondary characters is as many as you need, but not more.

How many secondary characters do you have? Would your novel be helped by having fewer characters? Does your protagonist need three best friends, or would one do? Does he or she need a large extended family, or would a dad and a gran cover it?

Some children will binge-read your book – they will start it and finish it as soon as they possibly can. Others might read one chapter at a time. Will the latter be able to remember who is who, if they read your story over a period of two or three weeks?

Here are the dangers of too many secondary characters: they can slow the story down, complicate issues and distract from your protagonist.

It’s worth thinking about these things, and making changes if you need to.

If you’re not sure about your novel, and would like some help, Writers for a Reason Unite is just about to open up again (Thursday) for new members. We’d love to have you join us! One of the biggest and most wonderful things about our Unite groups are the way writers-for-a-reason help and support each other. In small writing buddy groups, everyone has time in the ‘hot seat’ to get input about anything they want help with – like how many secondary characters to include in their story!

If you’d like any further info about the groups, check out this page, and do feel free to get in touch. Our groups really are helping writers get their novels done:-)

Have a wonderful day,

Janet Wilson, founder of Dernier Publishing

Janet

P.S. This is the link to the join an email list, to make sure you get all the information about our Unite group. There’s no obligation to join – it just means you get all the info so you can decide if it’s for you. Hope to see you there!

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What is your protagonist wearing?

Today I have a fun writing exercise for you!

What we wear is an outward expression of what we are like inside – culture, family, personal likes and dislikes, how we feel about ourselves… and lots more.

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So take ten minutes or so to write a description of what your protagonist is wearing.

Is the school skirt rolled up? Are the jeans the right length? Are the clothes clean or dirty? Posh and fancy, or ill fitting and old? Don’t forget colour and texture! And don’t forget accessories – was the necklace a gift from a granny or a best friend? What about their clothes makes them stand out or fit in?

Enjoy getting to know your protagonist a bit better in this exercise, so that ultimately your readers will be able to engage with them at a deeper level. 🙂

Hope that helps!

Blessings abundant on your writing,

Janet

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Colour!

A quick thought on the use of colour you might find useful!

A hint I picked up many years ago from a writers’ magazine, is the use of colour. It’s such an easy thing to do, yet so effective.

I was writing a story for 7-12s at the time, and went over the manuscript, inserting a colour on every page.

Blonde hair, navy T-shirt, silver Audi, black briefcase, brown envelope…

Then I went back and deleted any that seemed forced (which was probably more than half), leaving all the ones that I felt added something.

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It was so simple to make the changes, and definitely made a difference to the final story.

Could you do that?

Add a colour to every page of your current work in progress, or an old one you have hanging about somewhere!

When you’re done, go back and delete any that seem forced, leaving all the ones that give your reader a better picture of the action/scene.

Does that give your novel an extra lift?

I hope so! 🙂

Let me know how it goes,

Janet

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